Online Class Notes (Jesse)

nouns – how many?? (+s? no s?)

Check all the sentences to see which ones are related, and put conjunctions (lian ci) to connect them. Don’t use “and” constantly – use and / but / so / because / when 

This is Jamen’s first time on his summer vacation . Also this is my first time on the school holiday with Jamen . I don’t like the long school holidays because it looks like 2 years are not 2 months .

Jamen has an infection on his leg at the right side . He told me that his leg has a wound at Monday night and it looks like very litter and a bit red only but it become worse the next day …

This is Jamen’s first time on his summer vacation . Also this is my first time on the school holiday with Jamen . I don’t like the long school holidays because it feels like 2 years, are not 2 months . / it doesn’t feel like 2 months, it feels like 2 years. 

Jamen has an infection on his leg on the right side. He told me that his leg has a wound on Monday night (on Monday’s night <— don’t say that) and it looks like very little and only a bit red but it became / got worse the next day …

I am planning about the lunar chinese new year’s promotion. I just finished the new package promotion last night. I think our business will be better soon and I put different kinds of promotion together and then make the price cheaper so I think the customer will pay the new package very soon and we can get have more income .

We realized that there are 2 new cosmetic clinic are opening soon. Chatswood area is quite full at the moment but I believe that we concentrate our treatments and focus training and do the service well the costumer will understand we are the best .Also we are considering to buy new machines because the new will attractive the new customer because our location such a very good. Normally we can receive a few new customer every day so we can use our professional and we can recommend the customers which treatment is suitable for them .

We do review every day . For example , if you did a treatment with us the day before and you will receive a message asking you how was your feedback and if you feel not really nice, there are any questions for our service or our professional are not really good you can tell us which part are not good and we can do something change to improve .

I am planning about the lunar chinese new year’s promotion. I just finished the new package promotion last night. I think our business will be better soon and I put different kinds of promotion together and then made the price cheaper so I think the customer will pay for the new package / buy the new package very soon and we can get / have more income.

We realized that there are 2 new cosmetic clinics that / which are opening soon. Chatswood area is quite full at the moment but I believe that if we concentrate on our treatments and focus on our training and do the service well, the customers will understand we are the best. Also we are considering to buy new machines because the new machines will attract the new customers because our location is very good. Normally we can receive a few new customers every day so we can use our professionalism / our professional attitude and we can recommend the customers which treatment is suitable for them.

We do review every day. For example, if you did a treatment with us the day before and you will receive a message asking you how was your feedback and if you feel not really good, or there are any suggestions for our service or you think our professionalism is not really good, you can tell us which part is not good and we can do something change to improve.

Grammar

I went to the park, seeing many dogs
I send you a message, asking to have class
They will receive a message, seeing if they want to come for a treatment

when we have class, I am happy
If I am rich, I would buy 10 houses 

I see 2 dogs

there are 50% of customers who / that didn’t come back

You look like a nice person (n)
It looks like it will rain tomorrow (sentence)
It looks very yummy (adj)

i got better
it got worse

get = become
eg. I got a new phone – I changed from not having a phone, to having a phone
eg2. I got married – I changed from not married to married
eg3. I got sick – change from healthy to sick

I read something about English
I talk to Dion about her holiday
I made a story about my day

I pay for my classes
I work for money
I eat for energy
I run for my health
I exercise for my health

Yesterday I went shopping and we’re tired = we were
I am happy and we’re happy = we are