Online Class Notes (Jesse)

3-4 conjunctions per sentences

MB was hissing and gurgling whilst tapping the wooden plank with a hammer to give the customer the impression of coffee was being prepared which actually suprised the costumer that MB was actually not a customer scam. As MB was spitting, he poured some milk into one of the cups just about right just as he was bout the file a nasty feeling entered his mind and he was frustrated once again as he couldn’t find something for his foam and just as MB was about to do something terrible, a lady parked her bike just outside the Mr Cricket, and MB was curious to see if there was something useful in that bike like a bike pump which was exactly what he found, MB jumped up with exitment. With MB pumping his milk he grabbed searched the box once more and he found a file and exclaimed in wonder as he ripped the bar of slightly melted chocolate out of his coat. with MB shaving the bar of chocolate while chocolate sprinkles was raining down on the coffee MB said that the customer’s coffee was ready, he opened the shop window and presented his freshly “brewed” coffee to the customer with the customer accepting it. He looked at it in wonder and thought apprehensively about whether he should have a sip at it or not because he might end up in hospital.

MB was hissing and gurgling whilst tapping the wooden plank with a hammer to give the customer the impression that coffee was being prepared / the impression of coffee being prepared which actually suprised the costumer that MB was actually not a customer scammer. As MB was spitting, he poured some milk into one of the cups perfectly, just as he was going to file, a nasty feeling entered his mind and he was frustrated once again as he couldn’t find something for his foam. Just as MB was about to do something terrible, a lady parked her bike just outside the tent, and MB was curious to see if there was something useful in that bike like a bike pump which was exactly what he found. MB jumped up with exitment, with him pumping his milk while he searched the box once more finding a file and exclaiming in wonder as he ripped the bar of slightly melted chocolate out of his coat. With MB shaving the bar of chocolate while chocolate sprinkles were raining down on the coffee MB said that the customer’s coffee was ready. He opened the shop window and presented the customer’s freshly “brewed” coffee to him with the customer accepting it. He looked at it in wonder and thought apprehensively about whether he should have a sip at it or not because he might end up in hospital.

Vocabulary

newbie / noob 

seethe – the feeling of anger flowing through you

But the customer decided to try the coffee because he wasn’t sure if it would be really good but he wasn’t sure if MB was a scammer yet. But as the coffee went into his lips and down his throat he breathed a sigh of relief as it turned out that MB was actually not a scammer so he gave him 5 pounds to show his appreciation of his good coffee.

After that, while the customer was walking away he told the customers that were lining up outside the real cafe that MB’s coffee was better than the real cafe‘s so all the customers that are originally standing at it went to MB’s cafe. As MB was surprised to see so many customers turn up and he immediately went to the tap and started taking water but since there were so many customers he had to be really fast while making their coffee and getting water at the same time. All the customers had the same feeling as the guy wearing headphones and were wondering if they could rely on MB but as he gave them their coffee one by one they were surprised as the first guy was and realised that MB was not a scammer. All the customers lowered their expectations as they went to buy MB’s coffee and they were so happy as they realised it tasted so good and was such a bargain. Meanwhile the barista wondered why the customers suddenly disappeared and as he opened his shop door and looked around he saw so many customers lining up outside MB’s MSC giving money to MB and not his real cafe