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He always stay there ,when he waked up the next day , he found all the palace became chocolate pool . Due to well known of Wonk’s chocolate ,the other shopper have jealous feeling for it, so they appointed spied to steal secret recipe, and afterwards they succeed . Wonka had to stop the work of factory and dismissed all the workers . He locked the gate tightly till now

When the Charlie finished his supper ,and the same as usual he went to his grandparents room to say goodbye. In that time, his grandparents laid huddled in the bed , and then afterwards when they heard the voice of Charlie , plus they sat up immediately.they really liked Charlie.
Charlie sat by the bed and asked his grandpa Joe about Wonka’s Chocolate Factory, and then Joe told him Wonka’s Chocolate Factory which was the most fantastic and the most extraordinary in the world , because their candies were unique. For example his chocolate ice-cream couldn’t runny whether you stayed inside or outside for many hours, and their gum which included many nourishment such as vitamin and once you chewed it , plus you would feel not hungry again for many hours , and it suitable for poor children. The Joe went on his story . The prince who was from the other country really like Wonk’s chocolate and he order Wonka built a giant palace which is made of chocolate entirely.When Wonka finished this task and he told that prince this palace could ‘t stay for a long time , then it would runny, but that prince think it was nonsense . He always stay there ,when he waked up the next day , he found all the palace became chocolate pool . Due to well known of Wonk’s chocolate ,the other shopper have jealous feeling for it, so they appointed spied to steal secret recipe, and afterwards they succeed . Wonka had to stop the work of factory and dismissed all the workers . He locked the gate tightly till now

When the Charlie finished his supper ,and as usual, he went to his grandparents room to say goodbye. At that time, his grandparents laid huddled in the bed , and then afterwards when they heard the voice of Charlie , plus they sat up immediately. I think they must really like Charlie.
Charlie sat by the bed and asked his grandpa Joe about Wonka’s Chocolate Factory, and then Joe told him about the Factory which was the most fantastic and the most extraordinary in the world , because their candies were unique. For example his chocolate ice-cream couldn’t be / go / become runny / couldn’t melt whether you stayed inside or outside for many hours, and their gum which was nourishing / which included a lot nourishment / was nutritional and contained things such as vitamins. Once you chewed it , plus you would not feel hungry again for many hours , so it is suitable for poor children. The Joe went on with his story . The prince who was from the other country really liked Wonka’s chocolate and he ordered Wonka to build a giant palace which is made of chocolate entirely. When Wonka finished this task and he told the prince that this palace couldn’t last for a long time and then it would melt, but the prince thought it was nonsense. He always stay there ,when he waked up the next day , he found all the palace became chocolate pool . Due to well known of Wonk’s chocolate ,the other shopper have jealous feeling for it, so they appointed spied to steal secret recipe, and afterwards they succeed . Wonka had to stop the work of factory and dismissed all the workers . He locked the gate tightly till now

Grammar

it is suitable for you
it suits you

How to use some sentence from book into writing. – how do I use some sentences from the book in my writing?

my makeup is running (v)
my makeup is runny (adj)
my makeup runs (v) when it rains / when I cry

Pronunciation

extraordinary – ex tror din ar ee