Online Class Notes (Jesse)

Suddenly they stop playing and the man said lets have a race! Let’s see whos the firs tone to get to the london bridge…… who gets there first gets the 5 pounds, then mr bean said yes. And they started. The man started first and before he started he opened the GPS. While the man are opening the GPS Mr Bean tidied up the tennis racket and the tennis ball. Next Mr Bean started. Suddenly the man check the weather app, then oh it’s going to rain! I’ll take the underground / MTR instead. when it’s raining Mr Bean opened the umbrella and keep going but when the wind blew harder Mr Bean can’t hold it anymore, but the man was listening music from his phone and riding the underground.

Then the man heard the announcer say that the train was delayed. The rain suddenly stopped and while Mr Bean was outside in the wind he got an idea which was to get a skateboard and open the umbrella so he could use the wind to pull him along. Meanwhile, the man is still in the underground and his phone has no signal. When Mr Bean has almost arrived, he stopped all of a sudden in front of a place that was selling balloons to children (question: how did Mr Bean stop?)

Suddenly they stop playing and the man said lets have a race! Let’s see whos the first one to get to the london bridge…… whoever gets there first will get 5 pounds as the award for that person, and after the man said this, mr bean didn’t even stop for 1 moment, then said “of course because I think it would be very fun and it would be incredibly cool”. And they started to race. Mr Bean thought  it would be fun, and the man thought “I think I would win the 5 pounds, because I’ve got the better phone, since it is a smart phone”. Then, The man started first and before he started he opened the GPS app, so he can see the way to the London Bridge!! On the way, he was whistling a very happy tune / melody / song . While the man was opening the GPS, Mr Bean tidied up the tennis racket and the tennis ball, so next time he can use it directly. Next Mr Bean started. Suddenly the man checked the weather app, then said “oh it’s going to rain! I’ll take the underground / MTR instead” and the man thought “so I can’t let any water drip on me – not even 1 drop”. Meanwhile, Mr Bean was in the rain, and it was raining very hard, so he opened the umbrella, and kept going, but when the wind blew harder, Mr Bean can’t hold it anymore, but the man was listening to music from his phone, and riding the underground, and he is very happy, because he didn’t even get a drop of rain on him.

Then the man heard the announcer say that the train was delayed so the man is a little bit upset and kinda bored. The rain suddenly stopped, and while Mr Bean was outside in the very strong wind, he got an idea which was to get a skateboard, and open the umbrella so he could use the force from the wind to push him along. Meanwhile, the man is still stuck in the underground and his phone has no signal in there. When Mr Bean had almost arrived, all of a sudden he stopped in front of a place that was selling balloons to children which had different kinds for example X 3 a balloon shaped like an elephant, 2 balloons shaped like monkeys, 5 balloon that were different colors, 3 balloons shaped like a butterfly, 8 balloons that were shaped like unicorns, 2 balloons shaped flowers, 25 balloons that were shaped like different fruit, lastly 3 balloons shaped like a rainbow, and very lastly 11 balloons that were shaped like different pretty plants. (question: how did Mr Bean stop?).

Answer: Mr Bean closed the umbrella so the wind would stop pushing the umbrella. Then he would stop.

Meanwhile, Mr Bean was in the rain, and it was raining very hard, so he opened the umbrella, and kept going. However, when the wind blew harder, Mr Bean couldn’t hold it anymore, but the man was listening to music from his phone, and riding the underground. He is very happy, because he didn’t even get a drop of rain on him. – 3 sentences because there are 10 points 

1 point sentences – strong sentences
2-4 points sentences – explain things / tell a story

I had a great day! (1) I went to the shops and I wanted to buy some fruit and vegetables, so I brought some money with me (3). It took such a long time so i was really bored (2). What a boring shopping trip (1).