Online Class Notes (Jesse)

Watch the video and write what happened, like we did today in class. Correct your own mistakes! Remember: 3rd person verbs, check your tense for verbs, and use conjunctions (连词)

focused on self correction – Sofia’s responsibility is to correct her OWN MISTAKES. She finds the mistakes, she corrects them.

First I think oh catching fish will have a pole but going there and look we will use hands to catch. Like I and my sister and my friend and sister, I will to catch head and my sister will catch the tail and my friend will catch the body. A small… it have 18 fish in the small pool like a rectangle pool and we will go in. We catch 6 fish and catch 1 frog and other 1 people catch 9 fish. 1 people was very …. at catch fish. My mother, my grandmother, me, and my sister walk there. We live 2 place. 1 place is in the town, 1 place is near the mountain. The 1 thing is I can’t live there is because it has many insects. One time I go grandmas room and i saw a big moth! We go to the toilet and my grandmother use a bag to ….. it. And turn on the light and flew into the bag, and we go outside and the moth flew away.

First I thought oh catching fish will have a pole but when we arrived at the place we found we will use hands to catch fish. Like My sister and my friend and I will to catch the head from the fish, my sister will catch the tail of the fish and my friend will catch the body of the fish. A small pool, it has 18 fish in the small pool, and it is like a rectangle pool and we went to the pool and catch the fish. We caught 6 fish and caught 1 frog and the other people caught 9 fish. 1 people was very good at catching fish. My mother, my grandmother, my sister and I walked there. We stayed in 2 places. 1 place is in the town, another place is near the mountain. The 1 thing is I can’t live there is because it has many insects. One time I went to grandmas room and i saw a big moth! We went to the toilet and my grandmother used a bag to catch it. And turned on the light and it flew into the bag. and My grandmother went outside and the moth flew away.

Mr Bean goes to the jurassic park and he sees some mushrooms and he takes a photo and 1 beautiful butterfly fly on his camera. He want to take a photo to butterfly but it isn’t an easy work to take because the butterfly fly and fly. But, one time the butterfly stop 1 minute so Mr Bean take a photo very quickly! And, one dinosaur came and he thinks no no, no dinosaurs, I’m singing, I’m happy! And look in the hole “Oh.. some cute fox” and he takes a photo. And the fox says “you look you look and you look”.

Mr Bean goes to the jurassic park and he sees some mushrooms and he takes a photo. and 1 beautiful butterfly flies on his camera. He wants to take a photo of the butterfly but it isn’t an easy work to take the photo because the butterfly flies and never stops. But, one time the butterfly stops for 1 minute so Mr Bean takes a photo very quickly! And, one dinosaur came and he thinks there are no dinosaurs, I’m singing, I’m happy! but he looks in the hole “Oh.. some cute foxes” and he takes a photo but the fox says “OK you look you look and you look” and Mr Bean says “oh thank you fox!”

Vocabulary

they go down the mountain to back home – they go down the mountain to go back home 

moth

footprint / pawprint 

T-rex 

live – your home
stay – a short time