F2F Open Review Class Notes 15th March (Tanya) [w]
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Writing exercise
original
In reality show,a lot of famous person says what the pain you don’t know about being a super star.You can’t make mistakes,you can’t lose your temper and act coquetry like a spoiled brat or even get married.As a public idol,you are like a God.Because all super stars are perfect person in their fan’s eyes.Sometimes,one of your small actions can affect a lot of fan’s emotions.In may opinion,I don’t understand why fans are so crazy about their idols.I only hope their behavior don’t affect their lives
correction
In a lot of reality shows, famous people will say regular people don’t know the pain of being a super star. You can’t make mistakes, you can’t lose your temper and act like a diva or like a spoiled brat and they can’t even get married. As a public idol, you are like a God. Because all super stars are perfect people in their fan’s eyes. Sometimes, one of their small actions can affect fans’ emotions. In my opinion, I don’t understand why fans are so crazy about their idols. I only hope that their behavior doesn’t affect their lives.
Pronunciation
reality – rea li tey
regular – re gyu ler
diva – deva
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