F2F Class Notes (Tony) [W]
Vocabulary
no why – no reason
Writing exercise
Few months ago I saw a movie, l felt which is good, but if you are moody personļ¼I will give you some advice, donāt Watch the movie, because it will make you cry. The movieās name was (a dogās purpose)
It described dogs live from birth to death and from death to live. In the movie the dog has five live and different owners but it really like the first owner. it ownerās parents bought it when it was birth, at that time its owner was only eight years oldļ¼ they had a deep feeling and its owner often plays with it. The dog very smart it could understand more things. few years later one day when the family were sleeping, some guy set fire to burned their
house, who was its ownerās classmate, because the guy jealousy the owner, Everyone was very like him, play rugby also was very wellļ¼had once the guy lost some face by the bogās owner so he really angry with him, the same day night the guy walk to the dogās ownerās house to set fire, unfortunately the dog really clever and discovered some strange, suddenly it just stand up and walk out to check what happened, then it saw the guy set fire so it run back to wake up sleeping Master by its shouted, when he wake up the fire already was to big they canāt walk from doors so he wake up his mother and then he used his bed sheets to tie and took his mother and dog from the third floor window to first floor, it was his turn when he on the way the bed sheet itās broke and he fell down, his one leg was also got a break, after police and ambulance was come his mother and he went to hospital,the dog went to go with his master but the doctor couldnāt allow so it left at near the house places, it discovered the guy was hiding beside the tree, it shouted loudly at the guy then the police walk to dog they knew just the guy to set a fire so police arrest the guy. Since his master to get a heart he didnāt want to play with itļ¼he broke up with his girlfriend, and also couldnāt be a football player, he felt really depressed, they they moved to his grandparentsās home, there are a big farm and big grass the air also good, very suit to help to got a good mood. Few years later his master was to left here and to got a job, so the dog had to stay there with his grandparents. Year after year the dog getting old, didnāt want to eat anything, after his grandparents called him to come back and saw the dog at the last minute because he was going to die. When the dog was died in the few months then it became a puppy and master also was change. Like that the dog always birth and death death and birth. It has different life so when we have a pet we need to take care of them play with them, because they believe you.
Tony’s Corrections:
A Few months ago I saw a movie, which I felt was good, but if youāre an emotional personļ¼I will give you some advice, donāt Watch that movie, because it will make you cry. The movieās name was (a dogās purpose)
It described a dogās life from birth to death and from death to life. In the movie the dog has five lives and five different owners, but it really likes the first owner. Its ownerās parents bought it when it was a puppy, at that time its owner was only eight years old. they had a deep bond and its owner often played with it. The dog was very smart and it could understand a lot of things. A few years later one day when the family was sleeping, some guy set fire to their
house, it turned out to be the ownerās classmate. He set the fire, because he was jealous of the owner, Everyone liked him very much, he was also very good at football. Once, the owner (humiliated/made fun of) his classmate, so he was really angry with him, the same night the guy walked to the dogās ownerās house to set the fire, unfortunately for him the dog was really clever and discovered something strange, suddenly it just stood(past) up and walked out to check what happened, then it saw the guy setting the fire so it ran back to wake up its sleeping Master by barking.
Jesse’s Corrections:
When he woke up the fire already was too big they couldnātĀ walk through theĀ doors so he wokeĀ up his mother and then he used his bed sheets to tieĀ togetherĀ and took his mother and dog from the third floor window to theĀ first floor. It was his turn when heĀ was on the way the bed sheet broke and he fell down. His one leg was also broken, and after the police and ambulance came his mother and he went to hospital. The dog wantedĀ to go with his master but the doctor couldnāt allow it so the dog stayedĀ near the house. It discovered the guy was hiding beside the tree,Ā and it barkedĀ loudly at the guy so the police walked to the dog andĀ theyĀ discovered the guy who set the fire so the police arrested him.Ā His master got a heart, so he didnāt want to play with it, andĀ he broke up with his girlfriend, and alsoĀ he couldnāt be a football player, soĀ he felt really depressed
Tony’s Corrections:
they moved to his grandparent’s home, there is a big farm and a big field of grass the air is also good, very suitable to help get you in a good mood. A few years later his master left to get a job, so the dog had to stay there with his grandparents. Year after year the dog was getting old, the dog didnāt want to eat anything. After his grandparents called him to come back to see the dog at the last minute because he was going to die. When the dog died (V.) in a few months it became a puppy and had a new master, who was a policeman. Like that, the dog always had this cycle, birth and death death and birth. It has a different life so when we have a pet we need to take care of them and play with them, because they rely on you.
Grammar
When to use a V. or an ADJ.
When did the action happen? Use a Verb to say the point when it happened.
VERB:Ā Ā When the action happened. At which point in time?
He will die.Ā (Future)
He died. (Past).Ā Ā He died last week. (Exactly when it happened)
He is dying (Happening now, not finished)
ADJ:Ā Ā Ā Describes something for NOW.
He is dead(ADJ.) – describing the dog as he is NOW. or has been, since that happened.
Are a
Amy left after class.
Amy left to the store after class
Amy will go after class.Ā (goĀ TO WHERE?)
Amy will go to work after class.
The dog died (V.)
My dog died last year.
The dog is dead (ADJ)
Did you see that dead (ADJ) dog (N) on the street? So sad. I think it died because it was hit by a car.
The dog is dead.Ā Ā Ā When did he die? I don’t know when he died.
The cup broke.
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