F2F Class Notes (Phoebe)

Homework

Write a short summary about the news article on: https://us.cnn.com/2021/06/26/uk/uk-health-secretary-matt-hancock-resigns-gbr-intl/index.html

Writing exercise

Original:

The rise of fake news
What is fake news: it is false or misleading information presented as news. It often has the aim of damaging the reputation of a person or entity, or making money through advertising revenue.

In this news, it quoted one story about Hillary Clinton, which was one of the most famous examples of the growing phenomenon called ‘fake news’, and its political motivates behind.

In the past, we got news from trusted sourcecs and medias from newspaper and Television. However,with fast delevopment on internet in recent decades. We are easily to receive fake news from all kinds of websites, like twitter, or blog. That’s why the fake news stories can be hard to control. Besides, it is very interesting that fake news spreads more fast and rapidly on the sosical network than real news, because we are always attacted by headlines instead of reading full artical.

In the last paragraph, it mentioned what can we do stop fake news spreading. As a reader, when we read something at website, we need to check the source, where it is quoted. Is it a credible/reliable source? Suggest we can think and check it before reposting.

With corrections:

The rRise of fFake nNews

What is fake news: it is false or misleading information presented as news. It often has the aim of damaging the reputation of a person or entity, or making money through advertising revenue.

In this news, it quoted one story about Hillary Clinton, which was one of the most famous examples of the growing phenomenon called ‘fFake nNews’, and its political motivates motivation behind.

In the past, we got news from trusted sourcecs and medias from such as newspaper and Ttelevision. However, with fast delevopment on internet in recent decades, We we are easily to receive fake news from all kinds of websites, like twitter, or blog. That’s why spreading of the fake news stories can be hard to control. Besides, it is very interesting that fake news spreads more fast and rapidly on the sosical network than real news, because we are always attacted by headlines instead of contents of the full articles. reading full artical.

In the last paragraph, it mentioned what can we can do to stop fake news spreading. As a reader, when we read something at on the website, we need to check the source, where it is quoted. Is it a credible/reliable source? Suggest My suggestion is that we can think and check it news before reposting.

Grammar

I’m not totally agreed I do not totally agree 

too much vaccines too many vaccines 

I was heard by my Indian colleague I heard from my Indian colleague

how much people have the vaccines up to now  how many people have how many