F2F Class Notes (Phoebe)

Original:

Last Saturday we traveled to Li’an City in Zhejiang Province. We went there by car for four hours. I felt uncomfortable when we are all sitting in the car, because I got car-sick. Actually I bought motion-sickness pills before travelling. But I didn’t take it. I was afraid of there are some problems because I got vaccinated a few days ago.

We had lunch as soon as we arrived there. The meal was very delicious. They were all organic green food that the host planted by herself. In that afternoon, we played with glasses rafting. First we sat in the rubber dinghy, then it was sliding in the glasses track with the water for three minutes. After that we played with white water rafting for around two hours. It was more exciting than glass rafting.

In the second day, we challenged walking in the sky, it was very difficult for me. Because I am very scared when I am in the high area. I wanted to give up in the middle of the —, but my boss always encouraged me, finally I completed the challenge.

I found my skin got 变黑, 即使 I put on the cream.

With corrections:

Last Saturday we traveled to Li’an City in Zhejiang Province. We went there by car/ for four hours. We drove for four hours to get there. I felt uncomfortable when we wereare all sitting in the car, because I got car-sick. Actually I bought motion-sickness pills before travelling/travel. But ,but I didn’t take it them. I was afraid of that there are might be some problems because I got vaccinated a few days ago.

We had lunch as soon as we arrived there. The meal was very delicious. They were all organic green food that the host planted by herself/on her own. In that afternoon, we played with glasses rafting went rafting on the glass track. First we sat in the rubber dinghy, then it was sliding on the water down in  the glasses track with the water for three minutes. After that we went took played with ‘White Water’ rafting rafts for around two hours. It was more exciting than glass rafting on the glass track.

In On the second day, we challenged flying trapeze, and it was very difficult for me. Because I am very scared when I am in the high area. Because I am very scared of heights. I wanted to give up in the middle of the flying trapeze, but my boss always encouraged me, finally I completed the challenge.

I found my skin got 变黑 tanned, 即使 even though I put on the sun cream.

Vocabulary

raft  v.

go rafting (a type of sport)

sun cream 防晒霜

flying trapeze 吊架

Grammar

afraid of sth/afraid that + sentence

I am afraid of snacks.

I am afraid that I might get up late/I probably will get up late.

glass + n  (sth made of glass)

a glass bottle; a glass container

tan v.   tanned adj.

I tanned myself when I was working in the sun for 2 hours. 我晒黑了

I saw a tanned girl.

Pronunciation

saw