F2F Class Notes February 5th (Ben)
Writing exercise
Original
I plan to read two books once a week. Maybe I broke up to my boyfriend. So I hope me more and more excellent. I have always considered myself a positive thinker.
I have been read the book which you just look like strive. After read, I think we should treasure time and strive to life.
I will plan to travel thailand in March. Because I like temple and beach. Since I studied yoga, I like temple. I think temple is holy. I look forward to this trip.
Correction
I plan to read two books once a week. Maybe it’s because I broke up to with my boyfriend. So I hope I can be me more and more excellent. I have always considered myself as a positive thinker.
I have been reading the a book called “Just look like you’re trying”. After reading, I think we should treasure time and strive to live.
I will plan to travel to Thailand in March. Because I like temples and beaches. Since I studied yoga, I like them. I think they are holy. I look forward to this trip.
consider something as
break up with
two books a week (no “once”)
I am reading, I have been reading
before / while / after doing
strive to do
travel to a place
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