F2F Class Notes (Cricket)[W]***

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In the afternoon, there were three foreigners came to the fashion department store. A couple of man and wife took with their little baby, and a their friend. The little baby was sitting in a baby stroller, she looked so beautiful. The baby’s father was looking for a t- shirt, he looked all the man’s clothes ,and than he found a purple T- shirt, this t-shirt is M size and this man looks very strong so he wanted L size and then I helped him to find the L size. But I didn’t find the L size. I found te XL size and the man tried it on and yes the is ok its perfect. He wife said the t-shirt is beautiful because his wife loves the image in front of the t-shirt. So the man wanted to buy it and he paid for it using a credit card. then they leave the shop. I said hello and your welcome and come back next time. This purple t-shirt price is 168 RMB. I think the profit is 50 RMB and the advertisement is 20 RMB. Maybe the department stores rent is 25 for that shirt. If the shop sells a t-shirt we can make a profit of 73 rmb.


This afternoon, there were four foreigners that came into our fashion department store. A couple and their little baby along with a friend. The little baby was sitting in a baby stroller, she looked so beautiful. The baby’s father was looking for a t- shirt. He looked through all the man’s clothes and found a purple T- shirt. The t-shirt was a size M. He was very tall and strong so he wanted a size L. I helped him find a larger size.  Because I could not find a size L, I looked for an XL  and found one. The man tried it on and he loved it. His wife said the t-shirt was beautiful because of the image on the front. So he bought it using a credit card.

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I said and your welcome and come back next time. This purple t-shirt price is 168 RMB. I think the profit is 50 RMB and the advertisement is 20 RMB. Maybe the department stores rent is 25 for that shirt. If the shop sells a t-shirt we can make a profit of 73 rmb.

Noun +verb+ object+ how he paid

Pronunciation

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