F2F Class Notes 6th December (Celeste)

Writing exercise

Original

In overwatch,some heros’ stories are very complex.And I always play the hero named Mercy, her code name is Angel. She is the medic of the team.Let’s talk about Mercy also known as Angel.
“Heroes never dieâ€
Because of she devotes to treat hurt people, so “Valkyrie Suit†born.Mercy always wears it to takes part in many OW’s tasks. When OW dismiss,she still wears “Valkyrie Suit†step forward bravely to help many people.
Her weapon named “staff of Angelâ€, it is the rod of Caduceus.And she is the guardian Angel of all people hurt on the battlefield. She always smile gentle like Angel, when she jumps down from high places,she will open her wings.She has the Angel’s halo. So her code name is Angel.
Maybe she is the bad character.Sometimes she says“Heroes never die, for a price.â€And a talk about her and Reyes(AKA Azrael)is suspectable.
Mercy: What happened to you?
Reyes: You tell me, doc.
Mercy: This is not what I intended, Reyes.
Reyes: You knew exactly what you were doing
Reyes: (After killing Mercy)Remember, you’re responsible for this!
Reyes: (Angel revive) Oh, you’ve got to be kidding me.
Reyes: This is your fault…
Mercy: This is not what I had in mind.You might not want to tell this thing my team members about that.
So in this talk we can know Angel revives Reyes,because of some reasons he was betrayed OW. Angel is a puzzle ,but I think she is a good hero.

Edited

In Overwatch, some heroes’ stories are very complex. I always play the hero named Mercy, her code name is Angel. She is the medic of the team. Let’s talk about Mercy.
“Heroes never dieâ€
She devotes herself to treating hurt people, so she always wears her “Valkyrie Suitâ€. Mercy always wears it to take part in many OW tasks. When OW dismissed her, she still wore her “Valkyrie Suit†and stepped forward bravely to help many people.
Her weapon is named “Staff of Angelâ€, it is the rod of Caduceus. She is the guardian angel of all the people hurt on the battlefield. She always smiles gently like an angel and when she jumps down from high places she will open her wings. She has an angel’s halo. That’s why her code name is Angel.

Many people think Mercy is a hero and some think she is evil/a villain/a bad character. Sometimes she says “Heroes never die, for a price.â€

 Reyes think Mercy is a hero and maybe she will not help him.

Mercy and Reyes had a suspicious talk after Mercy revived Reyes. But then, Reyes killed Mercy because he was afraid that Mercy would tell her team members he was not dead.

Mercy: What happened to you?
Reyes: You tell me, doc.
Mercy: This is not what I intended, Reyes.
Reyes: You knew exactly what you were doing
Reyes: (After killing Mercy)Remember, you’re responsible for this!
Reyes: (Angel revive) Oh, you’ve got to be kidding me.
Reyes: This is your fault…
Mercy: This is not what I had in mind.You might not want to tell this thing my team members about that.

TBC

So in this talk we can know Angel revives Reyes, because of some reasons he was betrayed OW. Angel is a puzzle ,but I think she is a good hero.

OW have a team member his code name is 76. Reyes was his friend for many years. They were OW’s secret service. They always do some intelligence tasks. Reyes envy 76 because he think 76 is a more important for the OW. Reyes tried to kill 76 but 76 did not die.

Vocabulary

civilian n. – a person who is not on active duty with a military,naval, police, or fire fighting organization.

eg. Celeste and Fiona are civilians. They are not in the army.

traitor n. – a person who betrays another, a cause, or any trust

eg. Reyes is a traitor because he killed his own team members.

eg. She killed her friends so she is a traitor.