F2F Class Notes 28th February (Celeste)[W]***

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Michel and I went to Osaka of Japan for 3 days for celebrated our 3 year anniversary last Friday to Sunday. Michel booked the plane at 6:05 am which so early, so we slept at Pudong airport for the Thursday night until to check in. It was so fast to Osaka that the plane for 2 hours. Then we took the train to the downtown and we saved our bag in the box at the train station. And then we took the subway to Nara park for 30 minutes. When we walked out the station as we saw a lot of deer deer on the street who they are looks cute. I didn’t see any fences in the park because Japanese like nature. And I saw have a lot of deer food to sell by the sidewalk that the Japanese government wants tourists to buy the deer food and feed the deer.
We touched and took pictures with the deer, but they just care of your hands that have some food in the hands. If you have they would follow and around you. We visited all the park, after , we went back to Osaka to looked for food. Michel booked the BnB that likes homestay which so small.
The second day we went to Kyoto to visited many temples, we walked all day and ate a lot of delicious Japan food.I really like the Kyoto city because I felt Japan’s ancient culture in here. Michel lost a transportation card when we walked in the temple. So we turned back to follow the same way to looked for, but we didn’t find it. At last , we picked up a bus card for one day and I think a common saying that
When god closes a door will open a window.
The third day we checked out and saved the bag at the same station, and we went to the Osaka park to saw the sukura, but this season not good time to see it, just a few of flowers. In the park have a Lowson of convenience store, I tried to use the Alipay in Japan which so convenience. After, we went to go shopping that help my friends buy something. For our just bought some food. Michel said he did not take me to eat the sushi, so he took me to the famous restaurant to eat and we ate too much. I think we always walking and eating every day in Japan, but Michel said this’s really vacation. Haha. At last, we took the plane at 10:30 pm of Japan time to shanghai for about 3 hours. To home 2:40 am of Beijing time, it was too late to sleep.

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Last Friday to Sunday, Michel and I went to Osaka, Japan, for 3 days to celebrate our 3 year anniversary. Michel booked the plane at 6:05 am which was so early, so we slept at Pudong airport on Thursday night before check in. The plane was so fast, it was 2 hours. Then we took the train to downtown and we put our bag in the locker at the train station. Then we took the subway to Nara park for 30 minutes. When we walked out of the station we saw a lot of cute deer on the street. I didn’t see any fences in the park because Japanese people like nature. I saw a lot of deer food for sale by the sidewalk because Japanese government wants tourists to buy the deer food and feed them.
We touched and took pictures with the deer, but they just cared about the hands that have some food in them. If you have food they would follow you around. We visited the whole park and after, we went back to Osaka to look for food. Michel booked the airBnB that was like a homestay which was so small.
The second day we went to Kyoto to visit many temples, we walked all day and ate a lot of delicious Japan food. I really like Kyoto/I really like the city of Kyoto because I felt Japan’s ancient culture. Michel lost a transportation card when we walked in the temple. So we turned back the same way to look for it, but we didn’t find it. At last, we picked up a one-day bus card and I thought/remembered a common saying, “When god closes one door he will open a window.”
The third day we checked out and put our bag at the same station, and went to Osaka park to see the Japanese cherry blossoms, but this was not the good season. Just a few flowers were on the trees. In the park, there is

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a Lowson of convenience store, I tried to use the Alipay in Japan which so convenience. After, we went to go shopping that help my friends buy something. For us just bought some food. Michel said he did not take me to eat the sushi, so he took me to the famous restaurant to eat and we ate too much. I think we always walking and eating every day in Japan, but Michel said this is really vacation. Haha. At last, we took the plane at 10:30 pm of Japan time to shanghai for about 3 hours. To home 2:40 am of Beijing time, it was too late to sleep.

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screenshot/s n. – when you take a picture of your phone screen