F2F Class Notes 21st April (Celeste)

hairmen – hair dresser/ hair stylist / hair colorist

I bring it but I left it in the office. – I  brought it but I left it in the office.

Original

Yesterday, its raining. The weather is raining. I ask the help from my colleagues and they told me there is a pretty good store for cut your hair. Would you like to try to … I think it is a really good idea. Then, I take their advice from hair dresser and he thought I can change my hair style so,  as you can see I changed my hair. When I went home my husband thought the new style is good. So, I think sometimes change is good because you will get a new point of view from others and yourself. I think its the difference from my old opinion but maybe it will give me a new mood in my life. So, that tell me a truth, you never be afraid of change, maybe it’s a good thing or a good chance to be good.

Edited

Yesterday, the weather was raining. I asked for help from my colleagues/ I asked my colleagues for help, and they told me there is a pretty good hair salon. They asked me, “Would you like to go to the hair salon?” I thought it was a really good idea. Then, I took their advice to go to the hair salon. The hair dresser thought I could change my hair style so, as you can see I changed my hair. When I went home my husband thought my new style is great/fantastic/wonderful/amazing/beautiful/pretty. So, I think sometimes change is good because you will get a new point of view from others and yourself. My old opinion was long hair is greater than short hair but now, I changed my opinion. So, I learned something new, you should never be afraid of change because maybe it’s a good thing or a good chance to be great/different.

good store for cut your hair = hair salon ( suh lon )

was – werz (wuz)

Thank you for your encouragement.

I have get more chance to enter the higher level. –  I will have more opportunities to get a higher level.

opportunity ( op per toon it tee ) / opportunities ( op per toon it teez )