F2F Class Notes 18th April (Cricket) [W]

Grammar

He will become a Doctor.

He is becoming a Doctor.

He became a Doctor.

Our plan is to leave Shanghai and go to Germany when our child turns three years old.

Writing exercise

Last time I went to my home city on the march 30th 2017 , I haven’t saw my father a long times ,when I arrived home my father prepared some fruits and my local specialty snack for me . I really want stay my home everyone will care for me and don’t need do everything.but I can felt my father old then before and who had more White hairs ,I felt sad no sentence could be express my emotion , I want to spend more times With my father to took a lot,but I couldn’t always stay my father beside ,because I have myself life and I need to get more money for my future, I hope if I have leisure time I will go to my home city see them . So I just want saying where’s the time ,he became to an old man ,who don’t have enough time enjoy he was a young man .

Edited

Last time I went to my home city was on March 30th 2017. I haven’t seen my father for a  long time,when I arrived home my father prepared some fruits and my local specialty snack for me . I really want to stay at my home because everyone will care for me and I don’t need to do everything. But I felt my father was getting older than before and he had more white hairs. I felt sad no words could express my emotion. I want to spend more time with my father to talk. But I can’t always stay by my father’s side ,because I have my own life and I need to get more money for my future. I hope if I have more leisure time I will go to my home city to see them . I know my father wants more time to be a young man but life moves too fast.