F2F Class Notes 17th January (Celeste) [W]***

Edit the story below by yourself. Pay attention to your grammar. Upload the edited story in your next class. Be prepared to tell this story in class with more emotion.

Last Saturday, I went to my best friend’s home in the morning. She suggested we can made a chocolate cookie. We spent many times on it because sometimes we put too little chocolate or too much milk in the bowl. We always tried again and we found the material for thirty minutes. when we got all the materials “Eureka!” she said excited. Then we played a interesting game about the funny goat together, we can made the goat do any things. We ceaselessly spin the goat and impacted the fellows then laughed loudly. I had a nice weekend with my friend and I will cherish the times about I stay with her. I really don’t want to leave with her.

Edited

Last Saturday, I went to my best friend’s house in the morning. She suggested we could make  chocolate cookies. We spent many hours making the cookies because sometimes we put too little chocolate or too much milk in the bowl. We always tried again and we found the material for thirty minutes. when we got all the materials “Eureka!” she said excited. Then we played a interesting game about the funny goat together, we can made the goat do any things. We ceaselessly spin the goat and impacted the fellows then laughed loudly. I had a nice weekend with my friend and I will cherish the times about I stay with her. I really don’t want to leave with her.

Grammar

My teacher want me to introduce of me. – My teacher wanted me to introduce myself.