F2F Class Notes 13th September (Celeste)

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The Middle-Autumn festival is coming up. It is one of the traditional festivals in China.
We always have dinner with family in this festival because it is a very important festival for Chinese people. After dinner we usually chat and eat moon cakes together. It’s time for taking a break and communicating each other.
Moon cakes represent love, miss, greet, and etc. There are a lot of kinds of moon cakes. I like to eat the duck egg yolk moon cake the best. I like this one because I like eggs.

In this evening, the moon is so bright and round. Our family and I watched it together. That’s a beautiful moment. I hope we can see the moon in 2 days.

duck egg yolk

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The Mid-Autumn Festival, one of the traditional festivals in China,  is coming up.
We always have dinner with family on this day because it is a very important festival for Chinese people. After dinner we usually chat and eat moon cakes together. It’s the/ That’s the time for taking a break and spending time with each other.
Moon cakes represent love, togetherness, and thinking of our friends and family. There are a lot of kinds of moon cakes. I like to eat the duck egg yolk one the best because I like eggs.

That evening, the moon is so bright and round. Most families look at it together. It’s a beautiful moment.  At that time, the moon is the roundest. I hope we can see this round, beautiful moon in 2 days.