F2F Class Notes 12th December (Celeste)***

Continue writing the story below. What do you mean that “piano brings me some interesting” ? (100-150 words)Upload your writing in your next class. 

Corrections

When I grow up to the adults I can find good works – when I grow up to be an adult, I hope I can have a good job

when I am 4 grade my class had a party.  – When I was in the 4th grade my class had a party

many places have many people than other cities – Shanghai is a lively city it has more people than other cities 

Write a story (150-250 words) about why you want to be a pianist.

Original

In my childhood , my dream was to be a pianist. Because my father play the vilion very well and my grandmother was a piano teacher. I thought play the piano is very easy, it is cool. But now I want to abandon to play the piano，it is so hard and difficult to me. When I am seven years old ,I learned it. My father commanded me I must play the piano for four hours or more times on the weekend. It is boring and it makes me tired. Piano bring me some interesting，I can pluck my favourite music.

Edited

Since my childhood , my dream was to be a pianist because my father played the violin very well and my grandmother was a piano teacher. I thought playing the piano was very easy, it was so cool. But now I want to abandon playing the piano，Now, it is so hard and difficult for me. When I was seven years old I learned how to play it. My father commanded me to play the piano for four hours or more on the weekend. It is boring and it makes me tired.

TBC

Piano brings me some interesting，I can pluck my favourite music.