Email writing (jesse)

At the beginning of the month, I heard that the park introduced a new play equipment for children. So I took my three years old nephew and two and a half years old niece to the park the day before yesterday. Because we planned to eat a picnic at the park, we bought lots of food and drink on the way to the park, and took a blanket from home. In the park, there were kinds of play equipment which baited children’s attention. As the children never boated before, and I was scared that they were too active to fall into the lake, but I saw their eager eyes, so I got up my courage to take them boating. The fact showed children had the good ability of protecting themselves.

At the beginning of the month, I heard that the park introduced a new piece of / some new play equipment for children. So I took my three year old nephew and my two and a half year old niece to the park the day before yesterday. As we planned to have a picnic at the park, we bought lots of food and drink on the way to the park, and took a blanket from home. In the park, there were a few kinds of play equipment which got / attracted children’s attention. As the children had never boated before, and I was scared that they were too active and would fall into the lake, but I saw their eager eyes, so I got up my courage to take them boating. The fact that they didn’t fall, showed the children had the ability of protecting themselves.