Email Service Notes (Tony)

Your Original Email

This is Ruby from Hays, the U.K.-listed global leading recruitment group with over 6,800 people operating from 270 offices in 30 countries. We have a professional Life science team composed of more than 10+ consultants who have expertise in Pharma, Medical Device, Quality & Technology, Clinical, Mo & Service, Lab services, respectively, with rich practical experience and the best global talent resource in China market.
At the beginning of this year, to meet the needs of the market, and also to provide our client a better service, we re-allocated the internal resource and built up a desk forJoint venture hospital and Aesthetic Medicine industries.

Your Edited Email

This is Ruby from Hays, the U.K.-listed global leading recruitment group with over 6,800 people operating from 270 offices in 30 countries. We have a professional Life science team composed of more than 10+ consultants who have expertise in Pharma, Medical Devices, Quality & Technology, Clinical, Mo & Service and Lab services respectively. With rich practical experience and the best global talent resource in the Chinese market.
At the beginning of this year, to meet the needs of the market and to provide our client a better service, we re-allocated the internal resources and built up a desk for joint venture hospital and Aesthetic Medicine industries.

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