Email Service Notes (Tony)

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The day after tomorrow is Christmas ,i will rehearse with my parterner because it is only two weeks away from to my perform .today my teacher tell me he will add the line class in festival .i think it will really full ,and i enjoy to rehearse ,i will eat japanness food on Saturday , i want some salmon ,sea urchin,oyster and other food .brfore that i will go Gam with my friends.and i prepare a gift to my roommate ,i want make her happy .i think is similar as other day .

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The day after tomorrow is Christmas, I will rehearse with my partner because it is only two weeks away from from my performance. Today my teacher told me he will add the line class during the festival .i think it will be really full, but i enjoy rehearsing. I will eat Japanese food on Saturday , i want some salmon ,sea urchin,oyster and other food .before that i will go to the gym with my friends. and i got a gift for my roommate, I want to make her happy. I think is similar to other days.