Email Service Notes (Jesse)

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I haven’t written a diary for a long time until I started studying SmartEnglish in Feb. After the first phase of the study, I reviewed all the class notes that reminded me the life in the past few months. I forgot many conversations, yet I recalled many details and the emotions at the moment of the discussions, which I felt worthwhile writing and meaningful because these three months were a historical period for my hometown Shanghai. When I reviewed the class notes, I saw my life flashing and my mood ups and downs. Today I felt a bit low energy, maybe because of my biological period or the lockdown isolation. I sometimes missed my ex-boyfriend recently, who gave me some cozy and happy memories before the pandemic. However, I didn’t want to settle down with him because I did not feel secure when I was with him. A grownup’s life is diversified. When I grow up, I can give up something I already own to look for something that I don’t know whether it exists or not. I think it’s destiny and interesting, and I won’t regret it even if I did not find the things I want.

Your Edited Email

I hadn’t written a diary for a long time until I started studying at Smart English in Feb. After the first phase of my studies, I reviewed all the class notes which reminded me of the life in the past few months. I forgot many conversations, yet I recalled many details and the emotions at the moment of the discussions, which I felt was worthwhile writing, and meaningful because these three months were a historical period for my hometown, Shanghai. When I reviewed the class notes, I saw my life flashing before my eyes, and the ups and downs of my mood. Today I felt a bit low energy, maybe because of my biological period (hmm do you mean because “ayi lai le”..?) or the lockdown isolation. Recently, I sometimes missed my ex-boyfriend, who gave me some cozy and happy memories before the pandemic. However, I didn’t want to settle down with him because I did not feel secure when I was with him. A grownup’s life is diverse. As I go through life, I can give up something I already own to look for something even when I don’t know whether it exists or not. I think it’s destiny and it makes life interesting. Plus, I won’t regret it even if I don’t find what I want / I’m looking for.