Email Service Notes (Jesse)

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How time flies! It has been 6 months since I started my new job. It’s a Swiss company, and still in pharmaceutical industry, in which I’ve been working for almost 8 years.

In my current position, I need take business travels to Beijing frequently. Beijing is the capital, and it has some famous sites, eg Forbidden City, the Great Wall, etc.
Beijing office is located in the area called CBD, which sounds unfashionable. I feel I cannot quite adapt myself to the environment when I traveled in Beijing, even though it was only 3 days or one week for each travel.
The city is big, but the layout is not as convenient as in Shanghai. Sometimes I got lost when I walked around. And the streets are not clean enough, sometimes I felt that I was walking in a tier 2 or tier 3 city, not the capital……

Your Edited Email

How time flies! It has been 6 months since I started my new job. It’s a Swiss company, and still in the pharmaceutical industry, in which I’ve been working for almost 8 years.

In my current position, I frequently need to take business trips to Beijing, which is the capital, and it has some famous sites, eg Forbidden City, the Great Wall, etc.
The Beijing office is located in the area called CBD, which sounds unfashionable. I felt I couldn’t quite adapt myself to the environment when I traveled in Beijing / when i was traveling there, even though it was only 3 days or one week for each trip.
The city is big, but the layout is not as convenient as in Shanghai. Sometimes I got lost when I walked around / when I was walking around, and the streets are not clean enough, so I felt that I was walking in a tier 2 or tier 3 city, not the capital / rather than the capital / as opposed to the capital……