Email Service Notes (Jesse)

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I attended an exam which was so difficult today, but I felt I put my heart and soul to the test. Probably, I can get a good grade.
I went to the supermarket when I finished the test. When I got home, I was writing this daily life report. I found a strange problem which I want to write something but I cannot edit something interesting. Because I am honest? I ask myself. Should I need to read more reading?
Sometimes, if you want me to lie, I think it is a big issue to me. If I tell a lie, My heart is very afflictive, I cannot sleep for a few days. That’s why? The answer is education or value? Anyway, I recognized that I am not a good storyteller.

Your Edited Email

I attended an exam which was so difficult today, but I felt (that) I put my heart and soul into the test. I think I will be able to / I think I will get a good grade / I think I will probably get a good grade
I went to the supermarket when I finished the test and when I got home, I started writing this daily life report. I found a strange problem which is that I want to write something but I cannot think of anything interesting. Is it because I am too honest? I ask myself. Should I need to do  more reading?
Sometimes, if you want me to lie, I think it is a big issue for me. If I tell a lie, my heart is very afflicted, and I cannot sleep for a few days. Is that why? Is the answer education or values? Anyway, I recognize that I am not a good storyteller.

• haha do you mean you cannot come up with stories and use your imagination to create things?