Email Service Notes (Jesse)

Your Original Email

What good is?

– A: What’s up?
– B: Not much. All I do lately is sit at home and learn something new in front of my laptop.
– A: What do you learn?
– B: Well. Dance, I learn dance by watching Lily’s performance video.
– A：Speaking of the devil, she’s right behind you now.
– B: (Turn around) Hi, Lily,
– Lily：HI, what are you guys doing here?
– A: We are having a small talk. She just told me she’s leaning how to dance.
– Lily: Really? What good is learning that?
– A: Losing weight?
– Lily: Go to the Gym then for your own good, for dancing takes forever to lose weight, trust me.
– B: No, not for losing weight. I’m into it.

Your Edited Email

What good is?

– A: What’s up?
– B: Not much. All I do lately is sit at home in front of my laptop and learn something new
– A: What do you learn?
– B: Well, dance, I learn dancing / to dance by watching Lily’s performance videos / live videos.
– A：Speak of the devil, she’s right behind you / she’s behind you right now.
– B: (Turn around) Hi, Lily,
– Lily：HI, what are you guys doing here?
– A: We are having a small talk / having a chat. She just told me she’s leaning how to dance.
– Lily: Really? What good is learning that?
– A: Losing weight?
– Lily: Go to the Gym, then, for your own good, as dancing takes forever to lose weight, trust me.
– B: No, not for losing weight. I’m just into it.