Email Service Notes (Jesse)

Your Original Email

There are several Interview Q&As as below and I hope you can help me to correct them or make them down the earth. Many thanks for your job!

Q: Can you introduce yourself in about 2 minutes?
A: I am Ruby who is a typical Shanghai girl. I graduated from BCU with a masters degree in 2010 and got my first job in the spring of 2011 as a GM secretary. Form 2012 to 2015, I serviced for a wine company as a recruiter. Now I worked in a Pharmaceutical company to in charge of the recruiting job for two mainly business units which are Cosmetic and Consumer.

Q:Give me a summary of your current job description.
A: As a recruiter, I have around 5 years related experience. To be specific, I do budget control, HC forecast, talent search, and channel management.

Q：Why did you leave your last job？
A：Actually, I am still in my job now. I want to seek for a new opportunity because I think there is no good development space in my current role and I hope I can reach a higher level in my career.

Q：Are you a multi-tasked individual？
A：I am in charge of two mainly business units recruiting job in my company now. And I think I am the person who can handle multi-task at mean time and arrange everything good.

Your Edited Email

There are several Interview Q&As as below and I hope you can help me to correct them or make them down to earth. Many thanks for your work!

Q: Can you introduce yourself in about 2 minutes?
A: I am Ruby and am a normal Shanghainese girl. I graduated from BCU with a masters degree in 2010 and got my first job in the spring of 2011 as a GM secretary. From 2012 to 2015, I worked for a wine company as a recruiter, and currently am working in a Pharmaceutical company being in charge of the recruiting job for two of the main business units which are Cosmetics and Consumer.

Q:Give me a summary of your current job description.
A: As a recruiter, I have around 5 years related work experience. To be specific, budget controlling, HC forecasting, talent searching, and channel management are my main responsibilities..

Q：Why did you leave your last job？
A：Actually, I am still currently employed but simply want to seek a new opportunity as I feel that there is no room for development in my current role and as I am quite ambitious, I hope I can reach a higher level in my career and continue to push myself.

(you may still need to answer why you left your job before this one…)

Q：Are you a multi-tasked individual？
A：I am in charge of two main business units recruiting job at the moment, and I think I am the kind of person who can handle multi-tasking and arrange everything very well.