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Volunteers Needed

January 9 2018

To improve student’s ability and enrich after-class activities, the Postgraduate Association is recruiting volunteers for an international conference on globalization. It will be hold on December 9 2018 in Beijing.

Please provide some your qualification at the same time, which is including Chinese nationality, a strong personal spirt, cheerful personality and be aged under 30. In additional, candidates must have outstanding skills at English listening. Finally, any relevant professional experience is preferred.

It is a good opportunity to communicate and make friends with global foreigners. You can experience the strongly team work and sharing spirt in our team.
Come on! Join us, we are looking for you!

The Postgraduate Association

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Volunteers Needed

January 9, 2018

To improve student’s ability and enrich after-class activities, the Postgraduate Association is recruiting volunteers for an international conference on globalization. It will be held on December 9, 2018 in Beijing.

Please provide your qualifications at the same time, including your Chinese nationality, a strong personal spirit, cheerful personality and be under age 30. In additional, candidates must have outstanding skills in English listening. Finally, being able to provide any relevant professional experience is preferred. ***I’m confused about this part. Are you saying if they provide relevent professional experience they will be higher priority for being hired? Or that you want them to also list relevant experience when being hired?

It is a good opportunity to communicate and make friends with global foreigners. You will experience  strong teamwork and a sharing spirit within our team.
Come on! Join us, we are looking for you!

The Postgraduate Association