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Your Original Email

Good Day
This is the request about 2 type of lipstick samples for our new product development.

Sample1 name is ‘Water lipstick’ which concept is ‘Moisture essence inculded Lipstick’ .
Mandatory requirement
1. Target ; YSL rouge volupte shine
2. Slim type lipstick (중슬림)
3. Texture ; moisture/well sliding/pearly shine

Sample2 name is ‘Shine lipstick’ which concept is ‘Enamel glossy cover Lipstick’
Mandatory requirement
1. Target ; Chanel Rouge coco stylo , Shu uemura tint in balm
2. Super slim click type lipstick (클릭타입)
3. super moisture/high shine/high color

Especially the container of this semple has to be suggested.

Could you send me the suggestion date?
Please feel free to contact me if you have any questions

Regards,
Nina

Your Edited Email

Good Day
This is a request for information about  the 2 types of lipstick samples for new product development.

Sample1 name is ‘Water lipstick’ the concept is ‘Moisture essence included Lipstick’ .
Mandatory requirement
1. Target ; YSL rouge volupte(volume?) shine
2. Slim type lipstick (중슬림)
3. Texture ; moisture/slides on easily/pearly shine

Sample2 name is ‘Shine lipstick’ the concept is ‘Enamel glossy cover Lipstick’
Mandatory requirement
1. Target ; Chanel Rouge coco style , Shu uemura tint in balm(?)
2. Super slim click type lipstick (클릭타입)
3. super moisturizing/high shine/high color

Especially the container of this sample has to be suggested.

Could you send me the suggestion date?
Please feel free to contact me if you have any questions

Regards,
Nina

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