Email Service Notes (Ben)

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It could have been worse

Yesterday I had dinner with one of my friends / a friend. After I had paid the bill, I became very nervous, for I didn’t find my keys in the trousers’ pocket.

I tried to find the keys in my bag, but they weren’t in it / there. This situation made me so anxious because I had a key for every lock I own.

An even worse thing was that I didn’t have any spare key. I tried to remember where I had left my keys. Finally I realized they might be in the company’s locker room.

(recall = general: holidays, childhood, time in India, etc.
remember = specific: a word, a song, a place, a face, where you put something, etc)

I had probably forgotten to get them after I had changed my clothes. I called my coworker who was on the night shift asking him if he could go there for my keys. He did it at once. After 10 minutes he sent me a message saying he kept them at the office and told me to go get them the next morning. I appreciated it so much.

I have forgotten my keys for many times because of my bad memory . Yesterday was the worst situation. I didn’t realize that I had lost the keys till I had finished dinner.
If I had lost the keys, I wouldn’t have been able to unlock the locker room, my bicycle or my home door.

Your Original Email

It could be worse
Yesterday I had dinner with my friend. After I had paid the bill, I became very nervous, for I didn’t find my keys in the trousers’ pocket. I tried to find the keys in my bag, but they weren’t in it. This situation made me so anxious because each key was for each lock. the worse thing was that I didn’t prepare each key for in case/in case of lost. I tried to recall where I had left my keys. Finally I tought they were might at the company locker room. I probably forgot to get them after I had changed my clothes. I called my coworker who was at night shift asking them if he could go there for my keys. He did it at once. After 10 minutes he sent me the messages saying he had kept them at the office and telling me to get them next day morning. I appreciated him so much.
On account of my bad memory I have forgotten my keys for many times. Yesterday was the worst situation. I just realized that I had lost the keys till I had finished dinner.
If I had lost the keys, I wouldn’t have been able to unlock the locker room, bicycle or home door.