Email Service Notes (Ben)

Your Original Email

– Hello？
– Hello. It’s Vicky. How are you?
– I’m good. How are you?
– Bad.
– What’s up?
– I’ve had too many business trips this months. Sometimes when I wake up, I don’t even know where I am.
– Interesting. This is not your usual work style. Why do you have to make your life so hard?
– Would you mind speaking up a bit? I can’t hear you very well.
– Why why do you have such a busy trip schedule ?
– It’s Henry. No, it’s the new Product Manager. I don’t understand why he loves business trips so much. I can barely see him in the office. Henry (our boss) said I should have visited more customers like him. Honestly, seeing him has made me angry lately.
– I’m curious about how he copes with so many trips.
– I don’t care. I only care about the fact that I can’t take this any longer. To study / Studying abroad is my greatest desire. Maybe it’s time to quit.

Your Edited Email

– Hello？
– Hello. It’s Vicky. How are you.
– I’m good. How are you?
– Bad.
– What’s up?
– Too many business trips this months. Sometimes when I wake up, I don’t really know where I am.
– Interesting. It’s not your work style. Why do you have to make your life so hard?
– Would you mind speaking up a bit? I can’t hear you very well.
– Why, why do you have such a tight trip schedule ?
– It’s Henry. No, it’s the new Product Manager. I don’t understand why he loves business trip so much. I can barely see him in the office. Henry (our boss) said I should have visited more customers like him. Honestly, seeing him makes me angry lately.
– I’m curious about how he copes with so many trips.
– I don’t care. I only care about the fact that I can’t take this any longer. To study abroad is my greatest desire. Maybe it’s time to quit.