Email Service Notes 9th December (Raph)

Writing exercise

Original:

I’m a dog lover
I have a 16.5 years old dog ,his name is Joe . I have him since he was one month old .
Moved to Shanghai and put him at dog hotel is was a difficult decision . I was crying when i say good bye to him But My friend said Dog live in present moment .
I can communicate with him by telepathy and He will understand and accept the situation .
Dog is an amazing creature .they could read human’s mind via our voice and facial expression but also they know how to challenge our limitation . like a kid .
I will make most of myself send time with him . can’t wait for going back to Taiwan next Tuesday .
Edited:
I’m a dog lover
I have a 16.5 years old dog named Joe. I’ve had him since he was one month old, so moving to Shanghai and putting him at a dog hotel was a difficult decision . I was crying when I said good bye to him, but my friend said dogs live in the present moment .
I can communicate with him telepathically and he understands and accepts the situation .  Dogs are amazing creatures. They can read human minds through our voice and facial expressions, but they also know how to challenge our limitations, just like kids.
I will make the most of my time with him . I can’t wait to go back to Taiwan next Tuesday!