Email Service Notes 8th August (Celeste)

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Today my friends and I visited Mogan Mountain which is located in Zhejiang Provence. It took us for more than 3 hours to arrive there. This place is famous for its bamboos, trees, waterfalls which make this place is comfortable to stay. In summer, lots of people around would like to spend weekends here to enjoy the fresh cool air and local delicious food. It is really worthy of visiting. We were impressed by its beautiful scenery. There are so many bamboos that the sun cannot pass through the leaves. We swam in the sea of bamboos and enjoyed the peace and quiet atmosphere and clean air. We chose a small road which was difficult to walk on but it brought us lots of fun for few people would like to choose. We could talk aloud and share the recent things and express opinions. Beautiful view, best friends, good mood make this trip unforgettable.

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Today my friends and I visited Mogan Mountain which is located in Zhejiang Provence. It took us more than 3 hours to arrive/get there. This place is famous for its bamboo, trees, waterfalls which make this place comfortable to stay. In the summer, lots of people around would like to spend weekends here to enjoy the fresh cool air and local delicious food. It is really worth visiting. We were impressed by its beautiful scenery. There are so many bamboo trees/forests that the sun cannot pass through the leaves. We swam/hiked/climbed in the sea of bamboos and enjoyed the peace and quiet atmosphere and clean air. We chose a small road which was difficult to walk on but it brought us lots of fun for/because few people would like to choose. We could talk aloud and share the recent things and express opinions. Beautiful views, best friends, and good moods made this trip unforgettable.