Email Service Notes 7th February (Tony)

Your Original Email:

CCTV10 has a TV program called Natural legend. It transmitting everyday except Sunday. In this TV program, we can know how are lion , cheetah, baboon and other animals to live in the natural, not in the cage. I want to be a tourist to go to various safaris to see animals which are free. But it is very hard to translate ideas into action. Now I am in the “cage”, and listening the complicated talk everyday.

Your Corrected Email:

CCTV10 has a program called “Natural legend”. It is on everyday except Sundays. In this TV show, we can see how lions, cheetahs, baboons and other animals live in nature, not in a cage. I want to travel and go on various safaris to see animals in the wild. But it is very hard to translate ideas into action. Now I am in the “cage”, and listening to complicated discussions everyday.