Email Service Notes 6th May (Tony)

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isit previous colleagues
Last Saturday I visited my colleagues at the airport, which was the second department I worked at. It had been 15 months since I visited them. There I saw a guy, who was in charge of me and treated me best. I never formed strong bonds with my colleagues until he was in charge of me. He has been teaching me a lot.
This Monday after I finished dinner, I took a bus home. The coincide was that the final station is the place where was the first department I worked at and my former colleagues were working at night. I hadn’t seen them for nearly five years after I had gone to the second department in the end of 2012. It has changed a lot that there are so many staff I don’t know and so many colleagues I used to work with have resigned. I had chat with my coworkers before going home.
After visiting two places, I discovered those environments are so similar to that of I used to experience, but it also has changed a lot. From their words I know that they work much harder than before and the demands are higher. However, their salaries increase very extraordinarily slowly. They often complain about their job. I don’t want to complain about anything because it is no use. If I want to be better, I must be hardworking. The opportunities are always prepared for those who are always ready to get. All talk but no action can’t change anything.

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Visit previous colleagues:
Last Saturday I visited my old colleagues at the airport, which was the second department I worked in. It had been 15 months since I had seen them. There I saw a guy, who was in charge of me and treated me the best. I never formed strong bonds with my colleagues until he was in charge of me. He has been teaching me a lot.
This Monday after I finished dinner, I took a bus home. Coincidentally the final station was the first department I worked in at night with my former colleagues. I hadn’t seen them since five years after I had gone to the second department in the end of 2012. It has changed a lot and there are so many staff members that I don’t know and so many colleagues I used to work with have resigned. I had a chat with my coworkers before going home.
After visiting two places, I discovered those environments are so similar to what I had experienced, even though they have changed a lot. From what they said I knew that they worked much harder than before and the demands are higher now. However, their salaries increased extremely slowly. They often complain about their job. I don’t want to complain about anything because it is no use. If I want to be better, I must work harder. The opportunities are always there for those who are ready to seize them. All talk but no action can’t change anything.