Email Service Notes 6th May (Tony)

Your Original Email:

Follow my lead:
1. I know you are very aggressive and responsible. You always ask others to follow your lead, and you did a good job. But when it comes to personal life,honestly guys don’t like it. just because you like to lead doesn’t mean he wants to dance.
2. Speaking of your new role, just follow Peter’s leader, eventually you’ll be a master.
3. I’m really confused as the new comer, please let me know whose lead I can follow.

Your Corrected Email:

Follow my lead:
1. I know you are very persistent(?) and responsible. You always ask others to follow your lead, and you do a good job. But when it comes to personal life, honestly guys shy away from that. Just because you like to lead doesn’t mean he wants to dance.
2. Speaking of your new role, it would be wise to use Peter’s leader as a role model, eventually you’ll become a master.
3. I’m really confused as the newcomer, please let me know whose lead I can follow. Or if I need to show my own initiative.