Email Service Notes 4th April (Celeste)***

My wedding day occurred more than 10 years ago. It was on a nice autumn day. Considering the time-consuming of wedding planning, my husband and I ordered an wedding planning service from a special wedding planning studio. And we chose a simple western wedding ceremony instead of laboured and time-consuming traditional Chinese one.

My wedding feast was hold in a hotel and it began at 6:08 for the pronunciation of eight in Chinese is similar to the one of making a fortune, so our Chinese like eight very much. Relatives and friends for both of my husband’s and mine were invited to the ceremony, almost 200 guests sitting at 10 tables. The host was rather humorous and he made the atmosphere joyful and full of laughter. We underwent several steps like the bride and the groom giving vows My uncle giving a speech as a officiator and exchanging token of love. There were also some interesting games during the feast: biting an apple, lightening the candles on each table, cutting the wedding cake and pouring champagne in layers of glasses. The dishes were also very yummy, with good quality and quantity. Every guest was happy.
The most impressive moment was the groom’s vow. When my husband said to me”Though I have no ability to give you a luxury wedding and life now, I will try my best to let you feel happier and happier.” Although he didn’t say love to me but I could feel his love through his sincere eyes. I couldn’t help tearing but just for happiness.
Every girl dreams to become the most beautiful woman in the world at their wedding day. And I was the same. I prepared three sets of wedding dresses for my wedding. One white wedding dress with white wedding vail, two night gowns, one was red and another was golden. I wore the white dress at the beginning and changed twice when the ceremony went on. A make-up artist was there to change my make-up and hair styles to be suitable each dress.
Though time goes fast, the memory of my wedding day will stay in my heart forever.

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My wedding day occurred more than 10 years ago. It was on a nice autumn day. Considering the time-consuming wedding planning, my husband and I ordered a wedding planning service from a special wedding planning studio. We chose a simple western wedding ceremony instead of a laboured and time-consuming traditional Chinese one.
My wedding feast was held in a hotel and it began at 6:08 for the pronunciation of “eight” in Chinese is similar to the one of “making a fortune”, so Chinese like “eight” very much. Relatives and friends of both my husband and mine were invited to the ceremony. There were almost 200 guests sitting at 10 tables. The host was rather humorous and he made the atmosphere joyful and full of laughter. We underwent several steps like the bride and groom exchanged vows and tokens of love and  my uncle gave a speech as an officiator. There were also some interesting games during the feast: biting an apple, lighting the candles on each table, cutting the wedding cake and pouring champagne in layers of glasses (what does this mean?) . The dishes were also very yummy, with good quality and quantity. Every guest was happy.
The most impressive moment was the groom’s vows. When my husband said to me, “Though I don’t have the ability to give you a luxury wedding and life now, I will try my best to make you feel happier and happier.” Although he didn’t say he loves me, I could feel his love through his sincere eyes. I

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couldn’t help tearing but just for happiness.
Every girl dreams to become the most beautiful woman in the world at their wedding day. And I was the same. I prepared three sets of wedding dresses for my wedding. One white wedding dress with white wedding vail, two night gowns, one was red and another was golden. I wore the white dress at the beginning and changed twice when the ceremony went on. A make-up artist was there to change my make-up and hair styles to be suitable each dress.
Though time goes fast, the memory of my wedding day will stay in my heart forever.