Email Service Notes 31st October (Jesse)

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Today I had a dinner with my girlfriends. I’m so happy,because l saw their babies.The babies are so cute, I love them so much.A few years ago I didn’t like baby, I thought baby was very annoying.But now I think every baby is pretty, I think they are interesting.By the way ,this evening l am really happy.The first reason for me is the babis are very interesting,another one is l saw my girlfriends,there was a long time l didn’t met them.so this evening is a nice evening!

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Today I had a dinner with my girlfriends and I’m so happy, because l saw / got to see their babies. They are so cute, and I love them so much. A few years ago I didn’t like babies, and I thought they were very annoying, but now I think every baby is pretty, and quite interesting. By the way, this evening l am really happy. The first reason is what I said about babies and the other thing is that l saw my girlfriends. It has been a long time since l met them last, so this evening is a really great one.