Email Service Notes 30th December (Jesse)
Your Original Email
Now, I’m still working at the office…
My Boss, My colleagues and me are have a meet.
I have a bad cold and cough a lot. I feel tired but I don’t know when I could go home.
I’m not so satisfied with my job.
Although out team member are nice, but the workload is too heavy.
I want to change my job maybe next year.
But in this moment, my skill is not enough to allow me find a better job.
So, that’s the reason I begin to learn English again.
My Boss, My colleagues and me are have a meet.
I have a bad cold and cough a lot. I feel tired but I don’t know when I could go home.
I’m not so satisfied with my job.
Although out team member are nice, but the workload is too heavy.
I want to change my job maybe next year.
But in this moment, my skill is not enough to allow me find a better job.
So, that’s the reason I begin to learn English again.
Although I leart English until senior high school, but I began to learn Japanese from college.
I didn’t use English for almost 9 years…
So I forgot English almostly.
I think it’s hard for me to master English in a shot time,
but I will use English as usually as I can.
Fighing~ Roxie~
Your Edited Email
Now, I’m still working at the office…
My Boss, My colleagues and I are having a meeting.
I have a bad cold and am coughing a lot. I feel tired but I don’t know when I can go home.
I’m not very satisfied with my job these days.
Although our team members are nice, the workload is too heavy.
I want to change my job, maybe next year but at the moment, my I don’t have the skills to find a better job.
So, that’s the reason I began to learn English again.
My Boss, My colleagues and I are having a meeting.
I have a bad cold and am coughing a lot. I feel tired but I don’t know when I can go home.
I’m not very satisfied with my job these days.
Although our team members are nice, the workload is too heavy.
I want to change my job, maybe next year but at the moment, my I don’t have the skills to find a better job.
So, that’s the reason I began to learn English again.
Although I learned English until senior high school, I began to learn Japanese in / at college.
I didn’t use English for almost 9 years… so I almost forgot English completely.
I think it’s hard for me to master English in a shot time, but I will use English as often as I can.
I will keep on fighting~ Roxie~
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