Email Service Notes 29th August

Your Original Email

Last October I had my hair cut, it was a little short. I felt not very happy because I found I wasn’t myself. But now, the good news is that my hair is getting longer. The bad news is I find my white hair get more and more. There are many reasons to this. First I think it’s from my mom, because when she was as my age she also had white hair. The other reason is that I notice I get more and more stress on my work and my life. I should focus on myself and think which is I really want, which is not.

Your Edited Email

Last October I had my hair cut quite short. I wasn’t very happy because I found that I wasn’t / didn’t look like myself. However, now, the good news is that my hair is getting longer. The bad news is that I found that I have more and more white hair. There are many reasons for this. Firstly I think that it’s from my mom, because when she was as my age she also had white hair. The other reason is that I noticed I have more and more stress in my work and life. I should focus on myself and think about what I really want, and what I don’t want.