Email Service Notes 28th June

Your Original Email

My current company system is not perfect, rules and regulations are not normal. I think I am suitable for a more formal company, I am eager to get the training programms.

Your Edited Email

My current company‘s system is not perfect, and the rules and regulations are not normal. I think I am suitable for a more formal company and I am eager to get involved in the training programs so that I can learn more and progress as an employee.