Email Service Notes 26th October (Raph)

Original:

Our family will go to West Lake in Hangzhou this weekend. We planned to go there last weekend but finally we had to reschedule/change our schedule because of the bad weather. It rained all day on Saturday like a rainstorm. So instead we stayed at home all day and even could not go out to buy supper/food. I hope the weather will be good this weekend and we won’t have to reschedule/change again. We bought train tickets for half past 10 /10:30 AMand will arrive in Hangzhou around 12 o’clock PM.

First, we will go to my brother’s home after arriving in Hangzhou and have a late lunch with him because we have not seen him for a long time. We plan to go to West Lake after lunch and will stay there till the evening. I heard that West Lake is very beautiful since/after the G20 meeting even in the evenings. On the next day on Sunday we will go around the lake by boat. After lunch we will come back to Shanghai by train and arrive by 5 o’clock PM.

I am looking forward to this trip now,I bet it’ll be really fun!

Edited:

Our family will go to the West Lake in Hangzhou this weekend. We planned to go there last weekend but had to reschedule because of the bad weather. There was a rainstorm on Saturday so instead we stayed home all day and couldn’t even go out to buy food for supper. I hope the weather will be good this weekend and we won’t have to reschedule again. We bought train tickets for 10:30AM and will arrive in Hangzhou around 12PM.

First, we will go to my brother’s home and have a late lunch with him, because we have not seen him for a long time. We plan to go to the West Lake after lunch and stay there till the evening. Since the G20 meeting I’ve been hearing that the West Lake is very beautiful, even in the evenings. On Sunday we will go around the lake by boat. After lunch we will come back to Shanghai by train and arrive by 5PM.

I am looking forward to this trip now. I bet it’ll be really fun!