Email Service Notes 1st July

Your Original Email

Today I came to Hangzhou to take a apothecary meeting,This is my first day of a new identity to be a key account manager,Before that ,I was a sales manager for five years,it’s too much times in a position,but I love sales,it is an interesting job,you can met different person different things,someone strange,something amazing,everyday is fresh,you can learn how to solve the problems,how to communicate with people of each level ,now I will step up to another height,hope I luky!

 

Your Edited Email

Today I came to Hangzhou to take a apothecary (what do you mean???) meeting. This is my first day of my new identity as a key account manager. Before this, I was a sales manager for five years (which I think is too much time in the one / same / one position) but I love sales as it is an interesting job in which you can meet different people, see different things, some strange, some amazing…everyday is fresh. You can learn how to solve problems, how to communicate with people of each level etc…,now I will step up to another level… wish me luck!