Email Service Notes 1st April (Tony)

Your Original Email:

Hello Coach,

Following is my CV, I have an oppotunuty of interview , can you help me to check that the word and sentence whether or not is native speak.

Thanks a lot .
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Curriculum Vitae

PROFILE
1. Graduated from advertising major with over 5 years of professional advertising experience in 4A.
2. Worked in ACME as Senior account manager, being responsible for Philips and Braun social campaign and operation.
3. Worked in POSSIBLE, being in charge of brands of Unilever (Lux, Dove, Lifebuoy,Neutral). Obtained much experience from the whole project progress, including pitches, campaign launch, post buy, ect..
4. Worked in isobar, mastered media planning knowledge system and skills from market, TA and competitor analysis, strategies to post-buy.
5. Participated in the integration marketing plan of COKE, Sprite, Minute Ma, Fubon Bank and Nippon projects in Isobar from 2012.1 to 2015.6.
6. Winned the pitches in several times (success rate: 90% +) by strong communication skill, good knowledge of project management and team work. Completed every project in an efficient way, got the recognition from the clients and won more projects for companies.
7. Extensive capacity of computer programs like Photoshop and Office software like Word, Excel, PPT, etc.
8. Responsible, Diligent, ability of completing the mission under strong pressure.

Education & AWARDS
Art design major – Shanghai Commercial College (2010.9 – 2013.6)
Advertising major – Shanghai Normal University (2013.12 – 2017.6)

Outstanding Graduate of Shanghai Commercial College
Shanghai Outstanding Graduate

PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE
Served brand: Unilever (Lux, Dove, Lifebouy, Neutral), Wyeth, Philips, Braun, Coke, Sprite, Minute Ma, Fubon Bank and Nippon.

2016.10 –2017.2 (ACME)
Department: Account Service
Position: Senior Account Manager
Job Description:
1. Being responsible for Braun annual social operation, including Weibo and Wechat content optimizing and publishing.
2. Being responsible for Philips social campaign. Developed campaign strategy according to brand’s objective.
3. Joined in the pitch of Lee kum kee, finding consumer insight by marketing research, developing campaign strategy and proposal quality control.

2015.6—2016.10 (POSSIBLE)
Department: Account Service
Position: Assistant Account Manager
Job Description:
1. Took brief from client with director, analyzed clients’ requirements and dug more information, organized kick-off meeting.
2. Set campaign brand objective with clients, and proposed the integration marketing and campaign strategy with planners.
3. QC proposal content, ensured that the strategy and ideas matched with brief and client’s requirement to win the pitches.
4. Communicated with clients and internal in time to ensure project progress and execution (budget, time, human resource) for keeping the project being under control.
5. Help AE make progress, guide the project work flow and quick response in the event of emergency.

2013.5—2015.6 (isobar)
Department: Account
Position: Account Executive
Job Description:
Served clients: COKE, Sprite, Minute Maid, Fubon Bank, Nippon, etc.

1.Completed project execution proactively, boosted the project actively and efficiently.
2.Communicated with clients and vendors about campaign budget, deadlines, human resource and technical resources to ensure the project being under control.
3.Be responsible for post buy of every project and summarize the benchmark data regularly.
4.Be responsible for information collection, public opinion analysis, competitive analysis, etc.
5.Be responsible for Fubon & Nippon project

2012.1—2013.4 (Isobar)
Department: Media
Position: Media Planner (Intern)
Job Description:
1. Be responsible for weekly report of digital media promotion for COKE project and preparation for media material.
2. Be responsible for competitive analysis for COKE.
3. Communicate with creative department to ensure project being launched on time.
4. Be responsible for post buy report of every project.

TRAINING
Elite first corporate training certificate – Unique Powerpoint Design Skill
Elite first corporate training certificate – Project Management Skill

SKILLS
Language Skills:
English: Six degree

PC Skill
Master Word, Excel, Powerpoint etc.
Photoshop and Illustrator


Your Corrected Email:

Hello Coach,

The following is my CV, I have an upcoming interview , can you help me to check if the words and sentences seem like a native speaker or not.

Thanks a lot .
———————————————–
Curriculum Vitae

PROFILE
1. Graduated with a Bachelor’s in Advertising with over 5 years of professional advertising experience in 4A.
2. Worked in ACME as a Senior account manager, responsible for Philips and Braun social campaign planning and execution.
3. Worked in POSSIBLE, in charge of Unilever brands (Lux, Dove, Lifebuoy,Neutral). Obtained much experience during the project, including pitches, campaign launches, and post buy.
4. Worked in isobar, mastered media planning and acquired skills in marketing, TA and competitor analysis, strategies to post-buy.
5. Participated in the integration marketing plan of COKE, Sprite, Minute Ma, Fubon Bank and Nippon projects in Isobar from 2012.1 to 2015.6.
6. Won pitches with a success rate of over 90% . Strong communication skills, knowledgable about project management and teamwork. Completed every project efficiently, got recognition from clients and won more projects for companies.
7. Extensive capacity of computer programs like Photoshop and Office software like Word, Excel, PPT.
8. Responsible, Diligent, able to complete the mission under strong pressure.

Education & AWARDS
Art design major – Shanghai Commercial College (2010.9 – 2013.6)
Advertising major – Shanghai Normal University (2013.12 – 2017.6)

Outstanding Graduate of Shanghai Commercial College
Shanghai Outstanding Graduate

PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE
Served brand: Unilever (Lux, Dove, Lifebouy, Neutral), Wyeth, Philips, Braun, Coke, Sprite, Minute Ma, Fubon Bank and Nippon.

2016.10 –2017.2 (ACME)
Department: Account Service
Position: Senior Account Manager
Job Description:
1. Being responsible for Braun annual social operation, including Weibo and Wechat content optimizing and publishing.
2. Being responsible for Philips social campaign. Developed campaign strategy according to brand’s objective.
3. Joined in the pitch of Lee kum kee, finding consumer insight through marketing research, developing campaign strategy and proposal quality control.

2015.6—2016.10 (POSSIBLE)
Department: Account Service
Position: Assistant Account Manager
Job Description:
1. Took briefs from client with director, analyzed clients’ requirements and dug for more information, organized kick-off meeting.
2. Set campaign brand objective with clients, and proposed the integration marketing and campaign strategy with planners.
3. QC proposal content, ensured that the strategy and ideas matched with the brief and client’s requirement to win the pitch.
4. Communicated with clients in time to ensure project progress and execution (budget, time, human resource) for keeping the project under control.
5. Help AE make progress, guide the project work flow and quickly respond in the event of an emergency.

2013.5—2015.6 (isobar)
Department: Account
Position: Account Executive
Job Description:
Served clients: COKE, Sprite, Minute Maid, Fubon Bank, Nippon, etc.

1.Completed project execution proactively, boosted the project actively and efficiently.
2.Communicated with clients and vendors about campaign budget, deadlines, human resources and technical resources to ensure the project is under control.
3.Responsible for post buy of every project and summarize the benchmark data regularly.
4.Responsible for information collection, public opinion analysis and competitive analysis.
5.Responsible for Fubon & Nippon project

2012.1—2013.4 (Isobar)
Department: Media
Position: Media Planner (Intern)
Job Description:
1. Responsible for weekly report of digital media promotion for COKE project and preparation for media material.
2. Responsible for competitive analysis for COKE.
3. Communicate with creative department to ensure project being launched on time.
4. Responsible for post buy report of every project.

TRAINING
Elite first corporate training certificate – Unique Powerpoint Design Skill
Elite first corporate training certificate – Project Management Skill

SKILLS
Language Skills:
English: Sixth level of….?    Toefl? Ielts? 

PC Skills:
Master of Microsoft Word, Excel, Powerpoint and others.
Photoshop and Illustrator