Email Service Notes 16th February (Jesse)

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Today I read a news that said women doctors might be more efficient.

The news said researchers got about three million medical records of hospitalizations and readmissions, which showed the percentages of readmissions and mortality were lower if the doctor was female.

We don’t know why because researchers in that new didn’t explain it. I think it’s an interesting information, in my opinion, male doctor can treat patients more sensible, and provide more practical suggestion to patients regarding their condition.

But, in my 30-year live, I first time realize the payment between male and female on the same job is different. After that, I read other news regarding to the differentiation of payment to both groups. Now I know why women always fighting for being treated with fair. I think it is unfair if women get less pay but does the same work as man.

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Today I read some news that female doctors might be more efficient than male doctors / than their male counterparts / women may be more efficient doctors than men.

The news said researchers got about three million medical records of hospitalizations and readmissions, which showed the percentage of readmissions and mortality were lower if the doctor was female.

We don’t know why, because researchers in that news article didn’t explain it. I think it’s an interesting piece of information. In my opinion, male doctors can treat patients more sensibly, and provide more practical suggestions to patients regarding their condition.

However, throughout my 30-year life, I first time realize (what do you mean?) the payment between male and females in the same job is different. After that, I read some other news regarding the difference between payment of the 2 groups. Now I know why women always fight to be treated fairly / with fairness. I think it is unfair if women get less pay but does the same work as men.