Email Service Notes 12th October (Jesse)

Your Original Email
Today my feeling was a little down,because my jod was completed bad. I always thought the work was very easy,however I done it bad.so I think I should change my ideas about my job. In the work everything is big thing, there is no little thing .I should not ignore the tiny thing! I wish I could become better.

Your Edited Email
Today I was a little down, because I didn’t complete some of my work very well. I have always thought that work was very easy, however I do it so poorly. So I think I should change my attitude toward my job. In work, everything is a big thing, there are no little things so I should not ignore tiny things! I hope I can become better and fix this problem..