Open F2F Class Notes_13th May (Harmony)[4]

Next Class:  Keep Editing her Resume and Free-Talk on that topic

Review:

Regimen:  a regulated process of living to.

Ex:  My morning regimen includes washing my face, eating breakfast, reading some news, and waking up my daughter.

Now = present (for resumes)

Thorough:  extreme attention to detail, tasks are completed perfectly.

Ex:  Sometimes being thorough will waste a lot of time.

Motivate:  to encourage something/ thing through any different type of means.  – financial, emotional support, etc.

Ex:  The thief tries to motivate the policeman by giving him a bribe.

Story telling:

Daisy scraped the frost off the window to see the view outside. Trees were shaking in the bitter wind with a frightening sound. Dead leaves were shattered, lying on the ground. She got a bad cold and her neck swelled up.  She missed summer days, even if the lumps from mosquito bites still existed on her skin. She stood up and drank some hot water, which made her feel better. Then she stretched herself with a yawn. “It’s time for bed” she talked to herself and went to bed.

Re-Telling:

Daisy scraped the frost off from the window.  The trees outside were shaking by a bitter wind with a frighten sound.  She missed summer days and even if there is still a lump from on her skin and it was from the mosquito bite.  He drunk some hot water, and felt better.  Then she stretched herself with a yawn.  Said to herself it’s time to go to bed.

Edit:

Daisy scraped the frost off the window.  The trees outside were shaking in the bitter wind with a frightening sound.  She missed summer days, even if there were lumps on her skin from mosquito bites.  She drank some hot water, which made her feel better.  Then she stretched herself with a yawn and said to herself “it’s time to go to bed.”

Original:

There is a beautiful cat living around my home. She was afraid of people but want to solve the food resources. We offered her the food and the water, then she started to trust us. Now she enjoys my petting and often follows me into my house. I find she is pregnant and I am worried about if she will be a good mother. she was pregnant before and disappeared for a day. When she came back she her body got slim again but we had never seen her children. She has moved into our building under the stairs which is a small public area and maybe I can help her to take care of the small cats.

Edited:

There is a beautiful cat living around my home. She was afraid of people but wanted to find some food resources. We offered her food and water, then she started to trust us. Now she enjoys my petting and often follows me into my house. I found she is pregnant and I am worried about if she will be a good mother. She was pregnant before and disappeared for one day. When she came back her body was slim again but we had never seen her children. She has moved into our building under the stairs which is a small public area and maybe I can help her to take care of the small cats.

Ex:  She wanted to solve her hunger problem/ solve her food problem

Small cats = kittens/kitties/ baby cats

Small dogs = puppies/puppy

Ex:  We motivated the cat with food and water.

Ex:  We gave her a bath and were very thorough with our cleaning of her.

Ex:  I have added feeding the cat to my daily regimen.

Ex:  The cat likes to eat while we are monitoring her.

Ex:  I will help the cat by monitoring her kittens.

Ex:  When the cat is pregnant her tummy will be swollen.

Ex:  The cat likes to stretch her body in the sunshine.