Demo Class Notes (Maggie – Jesse)

Maggie

– 12 years old, international school, vocabulary, she feels writing and speaking are the same. Right now her focus needs to be on writing, doing essays, trying to use higher level vocabulary, sentence structures, and correct grammar. Currently her speaking has a lot of chinglish errors so needs to correct those, but she will be doing listening + writing test for international school so those should be the focus for now. 

推荐课程（每周）/ Your Recommended Course (Weekly)

F2F: 2

Writing: 2

What distinguishes young people from their parents’ or grandparents’ generation is a lack of physical exercise. Today’s generation are spending far too long playing computer games, chatting aimlessly on social networking sites or simply watching TV, and too little time being active.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

My favourite is japan because I love the food there and the air is fresh. I went to japan 3 years ago with my parents. We went there as a trip. For the first day we eat a lot of things and visit the sea. Then we go to see the reindeers and i feed them biscuits. I didn’t do much shopping there. I like Japan very much and there isn’t something I don’t like.

I wake up at 8 o’clock and I went out with my parents. We went to…. and we eat some noodles and it’s like a dessert, and it’s a rabbit, and it’s pudding. It’s coconut flavor. I will go for a walk and i need to go to the supermarket to buy something because we don’t have it at home. I’m a big fans of swimming, reading, pottery and drawing, and music. I like to design and do some fashion.

My favourite is japan because / since / as I love the food there and the air is fresh. I went / I’ve been / I traveled / I took a vacation / I took a trip to japan 3 years ago with my parents. We went there for a holiday. For the first day we ate a lot of things and visited the sea / visited the beach. Then we went to see the reindeers and I fed them (with) biscuits. I didn’t do much shopping there. I like Japan very much and there isn’t anything I don’t like.

I woke up at 8 o’clock and I went out with my parents. We went to…. and we ate some noodles which is like a dessert, and the shape is like a rabbit, and it’s pudding which is coconut flavored. I will go for a walk and i need to go to the supermarket to buy something because we don’t have it at home. I’m a big fan of swimming, reading, pottery and drawing, and music. I like to design and do some fashion.

Higher level version from teacher:

I woke at 8 in the morning, before going out with my parents to run some errands. First, we stopped off at a restaurant for a snack which ended up being a noodle-dessert which was shaped like a rabbit and was a coconut flavoured pudding. After this class I plan to go for a walk as I need to get some things at the supermarket that we have run out of. In terms of my hobbies, I’m a big fan of swimming, reading, pottery, drawing, and music. On top of this, I have a passion for design, specifically fashion design and I hope to be a fashion designer in the future.

Vocabulary

we went there for a holiday / as a holiday 

we traveled there for fun

it was a business trip
we traveled for business

conjunctions – and / but / so / because / when / if / which / where 

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