Demo Class Notes (Jerry M – Jesse)

one time i went to aus and another time i went to thailand, i think thailand is my favourite place because i can swim there and there are many places for playing and i went with my friends. My mother came with me one time. I don’t really like seafood. I think when I eat them I feel uncomfortable. My friend and my father they don’t like seafood too. I think it’s very hot there and when I go out and I have to wear tshirt, and I will feel tired when i came back to my hotel, and it always rains there so when I go out maybe I will take an umbrella with me. I think it’s a good city, I think it’s warm, not very hot and the weather there is sunny most of the time, and I went to a chocolate factory there and I think that’s a good place and my favouirte food is chocolate, and I often eat it.

one time i went / traveled / took a trip / went on holidays to australia and another time i went to thailand. I think / believe / feel like / feel / reckon thailand is my favourite place because / as / since i can swim there and there are many places for playing and i went to Thailand / I went there with my friends. My mother came with me one time. I don’t really like seafood. I think when I eat them I feel uncomfortable. My friend and my father they don’t like seafood either. I think it’s very hot there and when I went out, and I had to wear a tshirt, and I would feel / I felt tired when i came back to my hotel, and it always rains there so when I went out maybe I would take / I took an umbrella with me. I think it’s a good city, and it’s warm, not very hot and the weather there is sunny most of the time. I went to a chocolate factory there which I think is / was a good place and my favourite food / snack / junk food is chocolate, and I often eat it / my favourite food is chocolate which I often eat / my favourite food which is chocolate is sometimes healthy. 

Grammar

i have a problem about – I have a problem with

i don’t make too much problem with this – I don’t make too many mistakes with this / I don’t have too many problems with this

Vocabulary

I can’t get high point – I can’t get a high score 

I have a pen. It is black. = I have a pen which is black.

I went to a place yesterday. I think it is a good place. = I went to a place yesterday which I think is a good place.

it’s not very well – it’s not very good / I don’t do it very well 

hao
good = adj
well = adv