Demo Class Notes (Jesse)

Joan

i went to the singapore with my little sister and we go to the universal studio in singapore and that’s a great park. it’s a exciting place. i think singapre is a place that very hot, the weather in singapore is very hot. we played the different ride, and project name tranformer and that’s very exciting.

i went to Singapore with my little sister and we went to the universal studios in Singapore which is a great park. It’s an exciting place. i think Singapore is a very hot place. the weather in Singapore is very hot. we went on different rides, and watched a 4d short film about transformers which was very exciting.

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grammar (some short sentences), vocabulary shortage. 

ride = something at a fun park you can play on

the = makes a noun more specific
eg. the weather is good today
eg2. I went to the Starbucks in JingAn Temple

which
eg. I bought a computer which I wanted to do for a long time