3 Month Review Notes 13th September (Celeste)

Original
We plan to have a trip next month. Since my daughter doesn’t take the plane, she is very exciting about the trip. We are going to Guangdong, a warm place with a nice beach. One of our friends has a big house there. He’d like to borrow the house to us. My daughter had a cold last week we hope she will get better soon.

Edited
We plan to take/go on a trip next month. Since my daughter hasn’t taken a plane, she is very excited about the trip. We are going to Guangdong, which is a warm place with a nice beach. One of our friends has a big house there. He’d like to lend the house to us / He’d like to let us borrow the house. My daughter had a cold last week so we hope she will get better soon.